wusk 发表于 2003-11-8 21:31:21

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Suicide

He rocked the boat,


Did Ezra Shrank.


These bubbles mark


   o


   o


   o


   o


   o


Where Ezra sank.





wusk 发表于 2003-11-8 21:36:00

Odeto a Goldfish


by Gyles Brandreth


          O


         Wet


         Pet!








下天 发表于 2003-11-13 05:35:56

补充e.e.cummings的经典之作如下：）

l(a
le
af
fa

ll

s)
one
l

iness


个人感觉：孤单的极至，莫过于此

Echo 发表于 2003-11-13 06:29:21

括号里的话,不曾明白.
难道是小调?
l(a
le
af
fa

ll

s)

下天 发表于 2003-11-14 05:46:39

Well, the poem is:

l(a leaf falls)oneliness

or:
l(a leaf fa……ll……s)oneliness

It's vertical, 'coz a leaf falls:)




Echo 发表于 2003-11-15 08:52:34

well,
so graceful.
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